No. XXV. BURNS TO G. THOMSON. June 25th, 1793. HAVE you ever, my dear Sir, felt your bosom ready to burst with indignation on reading of those mighty villains who divide kingdom against kingdom, desolate provinces, and lay nations waste, out of the wantonness of ambition, or often from still more ignoble passions? In a mood of this kind to-day I recollected the air of "Logan Water," and it occurred to me that its querulous melody probably had its origin from the plaintive indignation of some swelling, suffering heart, fired at the tyrannic strides of some public destroyer, and overwhelmed with private distress, the consequence of a country's ruin. If I have done any thing at all like justice to my feelings, the following song, composed in three-quarters of an hour's meditation in my elbow-chair, ought to have some merit: LOGAN WATER. I. O Logan, sweetly didst thou glide, But now thy flow'ry banks appear II. Again the merry month o' May The bees hum round the breathing flowers: And evening's tears are tears of joy: III. Within yon milk-white hawthorn bush, IV. O wae upon you, men o' state, That brethren rouse to deadly hate! As fond heart mourn, How can your flinty hearts enjoy [Burns in one of his letters says, "I remember the two last lines of a verse in some of the old songs of Logan water, which I think pretty : "Now my dear lad maun face his faes, Far, far frae me and Logan braes." These lines belong to the "Logan braes" of my friend John Mayne: the song was printed in the Star newspaper of May 23, 1789, and soon became a favourite, as it well might : - "By Logan streams that rin sae deep, "Nae mair at Logan kirk will he The old verses to the same air, on which the modern songs are founded, will be given in the Poet's notes on Scottish song-they are curious.-Ed.] * Originally "Ye mind na, 'mid your cruel joys, Do you know the following beautiful little fragment, in Witherspoon's collection of Scots songs? Air-" Hughie Graham." "O gin my love were yon red rose, And I mysel' a drap o' dew, Into her bonnie breast to fa'! "Oh, there beyond expression blest, This thought is inexpressibly beautiful; and quite, so far as I know, original. It is too short for a song, else I would forswear you altogether, unless you gave it a place. I have often tried to eke a stanza to it, but in vain. After balancing myself for a musing five minutes, on the hind-legs of my elbow-chair, I produced the following. The verses are far inferior to the foregoing, I frankly confess; but if worthy of insertion at all, they might be first in place; as every poet, who knows any thing of his trade, will husband his best thoughts for a concluding stroke. O were my love yon lilac fair, Wi' purple blossoms to the spring; When wearied on my little wing! How I wad mourn, when it was torn When youthfu' May its bloom renewed. [There are fragments of song of a nature so exquisitely fine, that, like the purest marble, they cannot be eked out or repaired without showing where the hand of the restorer has been. Burns, though eminently skilful, has not succeeded in writing a verse worthy of the one preserved by Witherspoon: his lines are beautiful: but lilacs are not favourites with birds: the odour of their blossoms is unpleasing to the musicians of the air, and they seldom build in them or seek them out as a shelter. Tradition has many verses, some tender, others ludicrous, which I have heard sung as additions to the old fragment: "O were my love yon pickle leeks, That's growing in the garden green; "O were my love yon fragrant gean, That hangs sae drap ripe on the tree; And I were but yon little bird Far wi' that fragrant gean I'd flee."—ED.] |